James Deagle
Jun 30, 2024

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Thank you for this beautiful poem. My first thought when reading the opening lines, "take me where wildflowers reach for the sun", was that it could either be a wonderful song lyric (as it indeed has an inherently musical quality, in terms of rhythm as well as alliteration), or perhaps the title for a book of poetry.

I was just tapping my fingertips while reading it aloud, and it works really well in 3/4 time.

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James Deagle
James Deagle

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